Tuesday, November 9, 2010

A Story I Wrote In School

There were once two twin boys. Austin and Kayden.
One day the two boys decided to go for a walk in the forest. This was something special because the boys hardly ever did something like this. There was excitement all over the boys. At last Austin said,"Let's go." And the two boys zoomed out of the house. Soon they came to the woods.
While they were hiking the boys came upon a bear.
Now, Austin was very unique. He had a way of making things turn out right and he was magic.
Austin grabbed Kayden's hand while Kayden screamed in horror. While holding hands they jumped up and flew to High River to go fishing where there were no bears.
At last they got there and were safe while they were there.
Kayden said, "Austin, you're my hero."

7 comments:

  1. Good. Keep it up! I want to read some more stories from you.

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  2. Good Job Bug! Maybe you could draw some pictures to go with you story. A bear, and a forest. :D You did good. Looking forward to hearing the next adventure! ;) Love ya!

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  3. I like those names Priscilla!!! "Austin" and "Kayden"...especially "Kayden" is very unique!
    Funny, but you sounded like and reminded me of your mom when you said, "There was excitement all over the boys." Sounds like something your mom would say! How cute!!!!
    I like your story...I like Sherry's idea of pictures to go along with it. Maybe you can write a little children's book with more short stories and pictures to go along with them. Priscilla Lorraine, the author....I LIKE IT!!!!

    Hugs,
    S.Joycelyn M.

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  4. That is so good Priscilla. You keep those stories coming. Like he one you wrote for Christmas (the play). Good Job!!!!

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  5. Love it ;) Keep it up!

    Gillian

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